Friday, 30 September 2011

Without her...

I have revised the haiku that I posted yesterday. The sentiment and fear are still the same, but this, to me, felt a little more personal and intimate.

No longer her smile
Nor her breath upon my cheek.
How my heart would break.
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2 comments:

  1. Ms J30 September 2011 at 05:43

    Really poignant. I would interpret it as a mother's fear? But perhaps you meant something else?

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  2. Unknown30 September 2011 at 07:59

    Yes, I am getting the imagery of the fear of losing someone. Very good job!

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