Monday, 12 September 2011


Challenge 6 is to write a story in 140 characters. I thought of the late, great Ernest Hemingway's six word story which he once deemed his best work... "For sale: baby shoes, never worn." It's beautiful and poignant. I'm far from Hemingway, but here's a shot! :)

Peeking through tightly squeezed eyes. The result was in. Nothing would ever be the same again. Smiling, she picked up her phone. “Postive!”


  1. I'm going to stop commenting on Facebook and use this built-for-purpose comment box instead!
    I love :) It is indeed poignant. That first 'positive' changes your whole life forever. Great job, Rachel :)x

  2. I like it, it answers the question set. Though I must say I prefer the one above between the two of them :0)