Friday, 30 September 2011

Without her...

I have revised the haiku that I posted yesterday. The sentiment and fear are still the same, but this, to me, felt a little more personal and intimate.

No longer her smile
Nor her breath upon my cheek.
How my heart would break.


  1. Really poignant. I would interpret it as a mother's fear? But perhaps you meant something else?

  2. Yes, I am getting the imagery of the fear of losing someone. Very good job!